I need poem lyrics edited
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I have a lyrics to a choir song in poem format that I need edited. One line of the poem is a little too mean, and the final two lines are too violent. There is humor here, but, the way it’s currently written, it’s meant for older guys. I’d like to change these lines and ask for permission from the music publisher for the change so that my middle school choir can sing it at our choir competition soon. It doesn’t have to be a full nursery rhyme when editing is complete, but more appropriate for public performance. Would you be able to help? Poem attached.
*The final line where it says “finish the story” has been deleted. It originally reads like this: “And shot him with a horse pistol raised from a colt.”
*Everything highlighted (in any color) I would like changed. The rest of the story needs to remain the same (unless you change the “base villain” part, but if you can leave that part and still make sense with the story, that’s wonderful). I’m trying to stay within original content rules. I’m okay with seeing and discussing multiple edits of this, if you come up with them—for sure!
Thank you so much.
*The final line where it says “finish the story” has been deleted. It originally reads like this: “And shot him with a horse pistol raised from a colt.”
*Everything highlighted (in any color) I would like changed. The rest of the story needs to remain the same (unless you change the “base villain” part, but if you can leave that part and still make sense with the story, that’s wonderful). I’m trying to stay within original content rules. I’m okay with seeing and discussing multiple edits of this, if you come up with them—for sure!
Thank you so much.
Jonathan C.
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