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I need someone who loves crime novel to beta-read my completed manuscript. It is a police procedural of about 88000 words.
The book is the first of a trilogy featuring its main villain, Mandrake, which is also the title of the book
A demonology professor at Oxford, Johannes Mandrake, believes humans should be culled like animals. Whether it is the wealthy businessman who killed his wife in a road rage incident, the fellow professor who is molesting a choir boy, or the solicitor who doubled crossed him, he drives anyone he despises to their horrific deaths without hesitation. However, he is not the one the police are investigating. He is a specialist advisor to them.
A trainee detective, Evelyn Thompson, still recovering from her sister’s recent death, is placed in the team investigating a ritualistic murder riddled with ancient symbols. When she is sent to Mandrake to seek his advice, she has no idea what she is getting herself into.
The book is for the fans of the Silence of the Lambs and the Hannibal Lecter series.
What I wish is for you to read it as a reader and let me know what you think. Is there a problem with the plot, character, pacing, flow, etc.
Does it need more development? Do you have any suggestions? What's good and what's bad.
Your honest feedback would be appreciated.
I am not looking for a detailed critique or report. I have a budget of about £60 (it's negotiable)
I look forward to hearing back from you
The book is the first of a trilogy featuring its main villain, Mandrake, which is also the title of the book
A demonology professor at Oxford, Johannes Mandrake, believes humans should be culled like animals. Whether it is the wealthy businessman who killed his wife in a road rage incident, the fellow professor who is molesting a choir boy, or the solicitor who doubled crossed him, he drives anyone he despises to their horrific deaths without hesitation. However, he is not the one the police are investigating. He is a specialist advisor to them.
A trainee detective, Evelyn Thompson, still recovering from her sister’s recent death, is placed in the team investigating a ritualistic murder riddled with ancient symbols. When she is sent to Mandrake to seek his advice, she has no idea what she is getting herself into.
The book is for the fans of the Silence of the Lambs and the Hannibal Lecter series.
What I wish is for you to read it as a reader and let me know what you think. Is there a problem with the plot, character, pacing, flow, etc.
Does it need more development? Do you have any suggestions? What's good and what's bad.
Your honest feedback would be appreciated.
I am not looking for a detailed critique or report. I have a budget of about £60 (it's negotiable)
I look forward to hearing back from you
Junichi I.
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