New Sales letter wanted to achieve maximum response

Hello,

We are a startup English language company embarking on a campaign to partner with a more language company to help drive sales. We require a fanastic sales email to explain our concept and how we can add value to these companies on top of a commission.

We're looking for a business writer who can understand our potential partners, put yourself in their place and get our message across. Ultimately, we're looking for someone who can convince our potential partners to respond to our offer. We have a great product, with a great USP and no other company in the UK is offering our niche programme, therefore it would not be in competition but would add value to their company.

We actually have our own sales letter written out (attached), but feel this campaign is too important and prefer to outsource a star! who has an understanding of business sales copy and can drive responses.

Have a read of our letter and you will see a draft of our proposal.

We have identified 100 English language schools/colleges in the London area who we can potentially partner with, and have been in contact with a majority of their decision makers already. So we are now ready to present our email proposal to them.

We would like the written style to be:

-Business-like but friendly in tone
-Writing style that promises to avoid being a threat/competitor, ie that we would be trying poach their students, duplicate existing services, or even be in direct competition. Rather, we are offering something that compliments their courses, adds value to their company and offers increased revenue.

Our website for more info: http://www.acceleralanguage.com AND our current campaign with video: http://www.acceleralanguage.com/1-day-english-course/

Start date: Immediately
Deadline: I would like to send the emails on Monday morning, 15th July.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Ian