A Crowd Fund Campaign write up for Kickstarter

Hi,
My name is Peter Lochan and I'm currently looking for someone that can help me with my write up for a Kickstarter campaign which I am hoping to launch very soon, I have started writing it already but need an experienced writer to go over, rewrite and help me get it to a professional standard.

My company is a social enterprise, It's called BODO (BuyOneDonateOne) in short, I recycle car tyres and turn them into amazing looking sandals, for every pair purchased, I donate a pair to a person in need with in a developing country.

Currently my donation partner is the Barefoot Foundation, based in Columbia (The Charity that Shakira founded and helps run)
I have a website at www.bodofootwear.com
my current Kickstarter preview is at
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1647601013/839470424?token=2d9aee83
As you can see from the link provided, a lot of work is still needed to get it reader friendly and also to help the reader/Kickstarter backers understand my campaign clearly.

Any thoughts, ideas or suggestions you have are most welcome,

Kindest regards

Peter