Rewrite sales copy for CV bootcamp promotion

I'm running a CV bootcamp at the end of the month.

I've recently rebranded it from a "workshop" to a "bootcamp" and in line with this, I see the need for a more dynamic and engaging sales copy to sell the workshop and get people going, "Oh yes, I'm signing up!" by the time they've finished reading it!

The text I wrote for the workshop-turned-bootcamp is professional and informative, but it's not "salesy", punchy or direct enough for my liking.

I'm thinking something like this would be great - http://www.thetrainerstrainingcompany.co.uk/buildatrainingbusiness/index.php (I have a video testimonial I can upload, and some written testimonials too)...

...or like this: http://www.womenlikeus.org.uk/cv-clinic-1/

The total word count is under 500 words.

Please note: I am a writer myself but this type of writing is not an area of strength for me so I'm specifically looking for people who have - demonstrable - expertise in sales copywriting.

I need a fairly quick turnaround on this as I'd like the page to be up on my website early next week.

Feel free to ask me any clarifying questions before you place your bid if you feel the need to.

Many thanks,

Mildred