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Experience Level: Entry
Num. of words: 1000
Website url: www.hello-srilanka.net
Information for the blog/website: we sell private conducted tours in Sri Lanka
Industry: Lifestyle/Travel
Description of every page: Could you have a look at my website http://www.hello-srilanka.net
This is primarily for American and Canadian visitors plus a few Europeans no doubt and I need someone to translate it into 'American think' so to speak. There are a lot of hidden differences between English English and American or Canadian English.
I don't want to make too much of a meal of it but I feel some of my structures are not quite right and I don't mind being told this.
Brian
Somerset, England
Tone: Humorous
Outline & Structure: I don't mind the humour so long as it doesn't trivialise the subject matter. I'm after people who don't want to swan around in hire cars but want to get stuck in at street level. I'm also after people who are traveling on their own and once the comfort and assurance of people with them for first day when there are a bit disorientated and thus vulnerable.
Extra notes: Please only ask for this job if you love travel and please read the website first before you dash off a standard reply because I will not respond to them. *****I would like evidence that you've actually looked at the website*****
This saves all our time thank you so much.
Website url: www.hello-srilanka.net
Information for the blog/website: we sell private conducted tours in Sri Lanka
Industry: Lifestyle/Travel
Description of every page: Could you have a look at my website http://www.hello-srilanka.net
This is primarily for American and Canadian visitors plus a few Europeans no doubt and I need someone to translate it into 'American think' so to speak. There are a lot of hidden differences between English English and American or Canadian English.
I don't want to make too much of a meal of it but I feel some of my structures are not quite right and I don't mind being told this.
Brian
Somerset, England
Tone: Humorous
Outline & Structure: I don't mind the humour so long as it doesn't trivialise the subject matter. I'm after people who don't want to swan around in hire cars but want to get stuck in at street level. I'm also after people who are traveling on their own and once the comfort and assurance of people with them for first day when there are a bit disorientated and thus vulnerable.
Extra notes: Please only ask for this job if you love travel and please read the website first before you dash off a standard reply because I will not respond to them. *****I would like evidence that you've actually looked at the website*****
This saves all our time thank you so much.
Brian S.
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Brian, I looked at your website. I see, for example, the sentence "This is where our service will come in useful." I would change that to "This is where our service will come in handy" or "This is where our service is useful." Is this the kind of change you have in mind?
Brian S.06 Feb 2017more than that really, its looking at the whole thing and seeing whether it speaks with one voice. If you could kindly send me or point me to one example of your work this would be very helpful thank you so much
David A.06 Feb 2017Okay, thanks for the quick reply. I have examples in my portfolio.
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