PR Content Writing

Num. of articles: 1
Information for the blog/website: http://martekdev.wpengine.com/
Industry: Business
Topic: Wind Turbine Inspections using Drones
Tone: Instructional/Educational
Outline & Structure: I have a press release which is written but needs more improvement from someone who writes PR. The feedback that I am getting is that it needs more IMPACT!

I have attached the article (Statoil Sheringham Shoal REVIEW) and also the case study of the operation (Sheringham Shaol Case Study Final 2). For reference, I have also attached another press releases for the same company which has been published. I can send more if needed. This is going to the aviation/drones industries to educate how drones can revolutionise wind turbine inspections shown by our work with Statoil.
Extra notes: Willing to answer any further questions but would need it returned by tomorrow Wednesday 15th November am.