Make our website wording more enticing

We would like 3 pages of our website re-written to entice readers to read on and check out our galleries (we are wedding photographers).

Some tips after that around writing blog posts would be really appreciated.

The 3 pages are our homepage, our about us page (which is a chatty page about us), and the 3rd page is how we work, which we have tried to keep brief but it's still wordy.

Thanks
Clair