I want to write a dialogue for my book

I've recently written a non-fiction book to help programmers. And just before the Chapter starts, I want to include a fiction story, just to make the book more interesting. The fiction stories would be less than 1 page. And I have 9 chapters. I have some examples already. Please see below. But I know, I need to make them more better. I would like to add more than just the words people said to, but know sure how to do it. Is this something you can help with please?

Chapter 4
“Another two subjects have been enrolled onto the Hedgehog study, and we will be transferring all the Interim 2 data shortly. We would like an update of the safety profile please. And if possible, a graph that can show us the patient’s exposure, and their dose at each Cycle.” said Trevor
“Yes our team can do that for you. What’s that plot called again”? asked Jennifer
“That plot is called the Napoleon plot, or Swimmer plot. Primarily, I use the BARCHARTPARM or HIGHLOWPLOT statement to create it, and I use DISCRETEATTRMAP to make sure the attributes of the patient’s doses are always correct.”

Chapter 5
“When database lock occurs, we only have 3 days to produce the topline results for the Hope 301 study” said Jennifer.
“Please remind me of what the top-line results consist of?” asked David.
“We need to produce the Overall Survival and Progression-Free Survival tables and figures. I hope 3 days is enough time for the Kaplan-Meier figures” responded Jennifer.
“Sure, we can create Kaplan-Meier plots quite easily in SAS, with the LIFETEST procedure.”
“Have you had the chance to look at the mock-shells yet?” asked Jennifer. “You are aware that we also need to show the hazard ratio’s and the at-risk numbers right?” quizzed Jennifer.
“Yes, I’ve reviewed the shells. I will use the PHREG procedure to obtain the hazard ratio’s and use the ENTRY statements within GTL to display the hazard ratio’s on the plot. I’ll also use the AXISTABLE statement to produce the patient’s at-summary table.”

Chapter 7
It was a Tuesday morning when the Skype message popped up "Hey, I have a quick question. I'm using a website to create Venn Diagrams, but every time I need to create them, I need to export the data and copy the lists over to the website. I'm wondering if there is a more automated faster way?" Asked Adam.
"Sure, let me look into that for you. When do you need it by?"
"As soon as possible" replied Adam.