EBook Needs To Pop (entrepreneurial/business focused)

I have written a short ebook roughly 6000 to 7000 words that focuses on the inner game of entrepreneurship. I need someone who has experience in entrepreneurial/business writing to take this ebook and make it pop (and I mean pop, it needs to knock the socks off the reader).

I am happy for content to be added to make it more applicable to my target audience who are entrepreneurs.

Outside of ensuring grammar etc is up to speed. This ebook will be offered free on my site as hook to get people to sign up for my email list.

Please provide examples of your best engaging writing when applying. Applicants who have experience in the field of writing for business and entrepreneurs will be considered first.

Thanks!