Childrens Book

I am currently working on a children’s book, I have got it to a point where I thought it was finished but when I gave it to parents to read they all said the same thing. “Brilliant story but it’s not well written”. Also they said that it doesn’t feel like they could read it to their children, the grammer isn’t the best and it doesn’t flow, but the idea is fantastic.

Truth is that I am not a writer, I got the idea from working in children entertainment and I need someone to take what I wrote and turn it into a children’s book.

There are 10 pages and 2,404 words.