Blog writing 500 words

I got an article published for a pharmaceutical business magazine. I would like to get a blog out of that article which is written more for patients, so more friendly and less formal.
Here is the link to the article: http://deep-dive.pharmaphorum.com/deep-dive-patient-centricity-march-2017#!/to-psp-or-not-to-psp

The aim of the article: To show patients we are working with big companies to make sure they really start to think about what patients really want and need in their lives living with the disease.

Some topics:
- Pharmacompanies have a negative image to public, sometimes for the right reasons and sometimes for vague reasons. Pharma conpanies are not all the same, and some companies really want to help patients with their drugs. Without pharma where would we be?
-Pharma, they are starting to see now that they want to not just throw a drug on the market, but also guide/support patients to use it correctly so they improve quality of life living with disease and treatment. They are starting to develop Patient support programs.
- They should listen to patients to make sure these PSPs are actually helping patients, that where PIP (my company) comes in.
- I, founder of PIP, am also PhD student at King's College London, and learned there about intervention selection and how to determine what to offer in terms of support, to whom (see article, wheel of change)
- Call to action, sign up for PIPHealth and help us to help companies to create better support to patients like you/us.

Does that make sense? Thanks