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Hello, I have created this letter to send to people I know and connected with on linkedin. I need it in one day or less


Dear [[firstname]],

For about 25 years I have been following my passion towards information technology, started as a programmer in 1988 and have been through almost every IT job.

Few months back I had the privilege to reborn after an open heart sugery which I had on the 3rd of July, and I am saying privilege because it was a life changing experience and a blessing to have the chance to live a new life, redesigned the way I want as much as I could.

For the past 4 months and I have been studying, reading and researching the subject of professional coaching which I felt that it fits very much into my style and evolved passion, and for that purpose I created theONEsense http://www.theonesense.com.

theONEsense is not a company, it is about you and me, throughout theONEsense I provide Executive and Work-Life balance coaching services. My services as an independent professional coach is targeting
Organizations that is looking into creative ways to improve the performance of its executive, managers, supervisors and employees in general.
People who are stuck between work and personal life and need to find a way to create the balance.
Please visit my website http://www.theonesense.com and my blog http://blog.theonesense.com and let me know how my services can help you and your organization.

I appreciate your support and reading this lengthy email.

BTW I have also a facebook page and I appreciate if you like it http://www.facebook.com/theonesense

Looking forward to hear from you soon [[firstname]]

Regards

Issam Alameh
theONEsense
theONEsense is not a company, it is you and me.