I need to polish the letter written machine-made Polish

Here is the letter for mailing in Poland. The potential client is connected with IT and has at least a general idea about servers. Poland is the topic used to attract attention. The letter needs to be edited and improved by a native Polish translator who has a good command of English. The letter can be found in the attachment.

1. https://docs.google.com/document/d/196kgrWNOJQzQzWwFyc4qqath6-bobsgzzZFRAp1zFZk/edit?tab=t.0
2. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OdhJ8YX83jsmYmEt1bkhogNw8PEhAd8Q2sSZsxXxYkA/edit?tab=t.0