Website proofreading

Proofreading and review of text on the website - www.timothyaikman.com. Please provide an indication of suggestions….

After a recent update of my website, my current incarnation is now online.

However, I have been advised that there’s too “many grammatical errors as well as run-on sentences and far too many semi-colons.” There are a few other comments (such as that the text should be less formal), but it ends with saying that I should be “more authentic”