Web Sales Copy Job

I have 3 JV products that I have full rebranding rights on, I will be marketing them on the internet and driving traffic towards the sites. below I have given you existing sales copy for each product, I have since rebranded them.
I am reasonably happy with the original copy but I would like you to go through each and optimise whilst still retaining good sales copy and ability to convert into sales. i will provide full details of packaging of products and renaming of each if you accept as I will require images included in the content. Also I would want the names and any details within the existing copy of the individuals concerned as I am not allowed to use their names in my marketing. Please feel free to ask any further questions after looking at the original copy -
This is a very straightforward task for somebody who knows what they are doing.