Remake corporate video presentataion

We have previously created a very amateur video slide show presenting our main software product. We want this remade by a professional.

About the only thing I'm happy with is the script, it pretty much covers everything that needs to be said, perhaps only a very few small tweaks required (including shortening it).

Everything else is up for grabs and I'm happy to consider peoples ideas on what would work well

Existing video can be viewed here:

http://www.iplato.net/uncategorized/patient-care-messaging-video.html