Looking for some one correct my 140 words writing

Hi,
I am learning writing English. I am practice writing and I wanted somebody fixed my writing and show me what wrong.
I will write 140 words. You will fixed my mistake. I will try to write as much as I can; posible every day. I expected to pay £0.5 per 140 words but for trial, I can pay £1

I am really looking for some people help me improving my English for long-term. So it's better if you are female(male is ok but female is better as I am working with all male already), Bristish( London based is better but anywhere in UK is ok)

All of works will be done online via email or something similar.
Please contact me if this sound interesting for you.