Graphic design layout ideas

I am putting together a pitch document and are looking for some graphic design ideas to improve presentation and layout. I would like to start with two particularly clunky pages in what we have so far. If someone could look at these two pages for say, two hours and give me some ideas. Whatever ideas and alternatives you can set out in that time. If that is helpful perhaps we can look at more. My requirement is immediate, this afternoon/evening. The pages are created in Indesign and I can share the file.
The two pages in question feature 14 still frames from an animation, 7 on each page. I need to get the idea across that this is an animation. Then there are two short text paragraphs of information. Finally there are some lines of poetry in the background for context.
The document is 210mm square. It will be presented as an emailed pdf.