Edit and Complete Our Medical Device Business Plan

We are a medical device company - www.pnmedical.com. We just invented a new device that we'll be taking through FDA approval over the next 12 months and also seeking capital in 2nd Qtr of this year that the business plan is for.

We need our business plan edited and improved. I use LivePlan and can invite you to see it. Attached is a one pager about us and where we are going for your review.

Can you review the one pager and then I'll give you access to the LivePlan so you can review and we'll then have a call to see if this is a project you'd love to work on.

I'm looking for a writer who understands how to stay away from boring adjectives and speaks clear yet surprising and keeps readers interest.