I need to re-write my letter in a professional way..

I need to write a letter to get sponsors to my project.
I write tales and would like to produce them as animated film.. I have already written a form but I am not professional in getting sponsor to fund my project..
hereby I write the letter I have created to my need.. plas add or change the way you see suitable to do the job.

Ikramini
A single thread in a tapestry
though its color brightly shines,
can never see its purpose
in the pattern of the ground design
(prince of Egypt)

Ikramini has been inspired and amused by colors since her early childhood. Her dream was to own her own design line, to show the would her unique creations.
After years of passional & dedicated work, she has fulfilled her dream.
Art has no limits, so are Ikramini´s ambition.
Ikramini´s colorful and vibrant garments made her way like sun rays to shine in a theatrical fashion shows pioneering in this field as a storyteller, fashion designer, & cultures weaver, meaning merging east & west, north & south where the big world becomes as small as a theater stage.

Ikramini´s new vision is to get her stories told worldwide, and what is bigger than the big screen?
To do so we need to reach out for those who think outside the box as Ikramini´s stories are radical, controversial, & has a twist that can change life the way we know.
If you dare to risk your comfort zone, let's risk it together !!
you can go to my youtube channel on:
ikramini