A4 folded to A5 leaflet, need ideas to make better

I'm a carpet cleaner and have just had a leaflet designed for me on my instructions, looks really good but the guy can't help me with the concept. so i need some input into making the leaflet exciting. mainly the front page to encourage the targets to read more rather than bin. i have my idea and need to get this over to the said expert who can then advise changes and then implement them into the leaflet. need to be done quickly.