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Hi
Would you be able to do a translation commentary in detail regarding; structure, style, linguistics, terminology, vocabulary, cultural adaptation, etc.

I would then be able to can refer back and to use it as a guide to know how to construct other commentaries as I don't know where exactly to start. I would then like to do a commentary on the next part of the article, which hopefully you would be able to comment on.

I did my studies a long time ago, however, I would like to do a PGCE or Interpreting/ Translation course next year and I would like to be able to get my mind back into studying as I realise it would be intensive and I need to get myself ready. I enjoy French cinema and banlieue films which is why I am interested in the banlieue.
As I am bilingual the translation should be correct, however, I may have made some translation errors, so I would welcome any comment.

I attach the French text. I can send the English translation if you are interested

Hopefully, this will interest you and you can send me a proposal. Hopefully you are free this week which would be great.
Best wishes

Andrea