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We need thie following text rewritten to sound more dynamic, more to the point, non repetitive, interesting, etc....
here is the text
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Hi I’m Derek
And I’m Sian
And together we own and operate Arcadia rug spa
We started out cleaning carpets upholstery and rugs but soon realised that we weren’t cleaning rugs properly even with the high powered carpet cleaning equipment we owned.
So we looked into how we could improve our results for rugs
We’ve always strived to be the best and rug cleaning was no exception, we wanted to be the best but soon realised that our carpet cleaning equipment wasn’t cleaning rugs the way it cleaned carpets,
We needed a different approach so looked towards America, being the best rug cleaners in the world we decided to do our research
We soon invested in a complete new cleaning set up and the results were just like chalk and cheese
Not only were we noticing the difference in results but our customers were too. We fell in love with rug cleaning and decided that this is what we wanted to do, and only this so arcadia rug spa was born.
We stopped cleaning carpets and upholstery, and now put all our time into cleaning restoring and repairing rugs. Too many rugs go into landfill purely because carpet cleaners cant clean them properly, so it’s our mission to cut out as many rugs from landfill as possible.
We have dry cleaning machines to get hard soils out,
We have a pit to thoroughly submerge rugs under water for the ultimate clean,
We have marinating pits for long soaks to get odours out
We are the rug equivalent to your washing machine for clothes. So we are basically and enormous building turned into a fully functioning, cleaning and drying washing machine.
We are also fully versed in rug construction, so we can take rugs apart and put them back together again, while repairing on the way,
We are also fully trained in chemistry to help us with a variety of stain removal techniques unrivalled in our industry, So when a carpet cleaner says he can’t get that stain out, and we are not saying we definitely can, but hey, come and see us for a second opinion, there’s a good chance we might just be able to. Or at least improve the stain.
So there you have it, Arcadia rug spa are a massive one stop shop for rug cleaning repair and restoration, saving rugs from landfill and cleaning rugs to such a good standard that you can start buy ing more expensive rugs knowing full well, if your pets have an accident on them, someone like us can rescue the rug so you don’t have to throw it away and buy another one.
Contact us today and let us become your new rug cleaning professional.
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the text will go over a video that will be narrated by us. it needs to be shortened, direct and to the point, keeping the main factors about why someone should use our services over a carpet cleaner,
UK Only please, i only use people from the UK,
here is the text
..........................
Hi I’m Derek
And I’m Sian
And together we own and operate Arcadia rug spa
We started out cleaning carpets upholstery and rugs but soon realised that we weren’t cleaning rugs properly even with the high powered carpet cleaning equipment we owned.
So we looked into how we could improve our results for rugs
We’ve always strived to be the best and rug cleaning was no exception, we wanted to be the best but soon realised that our carpet cleaning equipment wasn’t cleaning rugs the way it cleaned carpets,
We needed a different approach so looked towards America, being the best rug cleaners in the world we decided to do our research
We soon invested in a complete new cleaning set up and the results were just like chalk and cheese
Not only were we noticing the difference in results but our customers were too. We fell in love with rug cleaning and decided that this is what we wanted to do, and only this so arcadia rug spa was born.
We stopped cleaning carpets and upholstery, and now put all our time into cleaning restoring and repairing rugs. Too many rugs go into landfill purely because carpet cleaners cant clean them properly, so it’s our mission to cut out as many rugs from landfill as possible.
We have dry cleaning machines to get hard soils out,
We have a pit to thoroughly submerge rugs under water for the ultimate clean,
We have marinating pits for long soaks to get odours out
We are the rug equivalent to your washing machine for clothes. So we are basically and enormous building turned into a fully functioning, cleaning and drying washing machine.
We are also fully versed in rug construction, so we can take rugs apart and put them back together again, while repairing on the way,
We are also fully trained in chemistry to help us with a variety of stain removal techniques unrivalled in our industry, So when a carpet cleaner says he can’t get that stain out, and we are not saying we definitely can, but hey, come and see us for a second opinion, there’s a good chance we might just be able to. Or at least improve the stain.
So there you have it, Arcadia rug spa are a massive one stop shop for rug cleaning repair and restoration, saving rugs from landfill and cleaning rugs to such a good standard that you can start buy ing more expensive rugs knowing full well, if your pets have an accident on them, someone like us can rescue the rug so you don’t have to throw it away and buy another one.
Contact us today and let us become your new rug cleaning professional.
..............................
the text will go over a video that will be narrated by us. it needs to be shortened, direct and to the point, keeping the main factors about why someone should use our services over a carpet cleaner,
UK Only please, i only use people from the UK,
Derek W.
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