Experience Level: Intermediate
First and foremost, happy Christmas ! I'm back with the Musketeers project, and I was wondering whether you could squeeze in a few hours' work…. I've kept all what you've written, and added a prologue, from my POV. One issue is switching the prologue's POV to chapter I's POV onward, which is all Rose's POV. Any idea on how to solve that? Also, feel free to rewrite the prologue, if needed, and I'd like you to rewrite and expand two new scenes that I've introduced: the first one is the Taverne scene, which lacks dialogues & sense of place (how the tavern looks like etc: big, raucous type of place) and the skirlish scene before Calais (p124) where they're attacked by either Red Guards or thieves (or, more likely, red guards posing as thieves). I haven't changed anything to the rest by I do feel that these three extra texts are necessary, it's just that they're poorly written at the moment. Please bill me on an hourly basis, or whatever. I very much appreciate the quality of your work. Cheers from Gascony ! Serge
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11 Aug 2020
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