I need my keynote speech editing / humour adding / made better!

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Linda I.
Amanda T.Sarpedon W.Derek T.Adrian H. + 12 others have already sent a proposal.
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Description

Experience Level: Intermediate
Num. of words: 2000
Topic: owning a business / health & wellness products
Tone: Enthusiastic
Extensive research needed: no
Extra notes: I have a presentation / keynote speech.

I have done the basic outline, but I would like someone to go over it for me.

- Specifically, I want to know if it is convincing enough and how I can get it to convert more / be more effective (the aim of the presentation is to sell beauty / health products and to convince people to start their own business being distributors of those products for me)

- It needs to be no more than 20 mins in length, it is longer than this currently so I would like someone to edit it, making it more concise and to the point whilst also conveying the message clearly.

- I would like some humour adding (it has a bit but I'm no stand up comedian!) to make it more engaging and fun to listen to.

- I would like it to be inspiring and spur people into action.

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  • Moira M.

    Hi Lorna, could you send me it so I can have a look at it? What is your deadline? thanks