Sales Letter & Proofreading
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Description
Experience Level: Entry
Estimated project duration: less than 1 week
Num. of words: 1500 -- 2000
Topic: Internet Marketing
Tone: Enthusiastic
Extensive research needed: no
Extra notes:
Hi there,
There are two documents in this project.
The first one (SalesPage.docx) is the text of a sales page. I need it rewritten, to make it more effective. Please DON’T bid for this job if you don’t feel prepared for efficiently rewriting the text in this first document.
As “Tone” I selected “Enthusiastic” from the drop-down menu, but it can be witty, friendly, humorous, but DON’T make it formal.
Different parts in the text are written in different colours. There are different instructions for each part (colour):
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The first part (in BLACK) can be ignored, I’m somewhat satisfied with it, but I’m open for your suggestions if you feel necessary.
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The second part (in GREEN) is just one sentence. I need the message of that sentence, but I don’t like as it sounds. This sentence can be rewritten IF it gets better, but the meaning should remain the same.
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The next part (in BLUE) must be rewritten to become MORE READABLE and LESS BORING:
Guidelines:
- Main Ideas: 1. Affected by the ”Shiny Object Syndrome I’ve left stupidly an excellent opportunity; - 2. Moneymaking requires: know-how, work, TOOLS –> EXPENSES; - 3. Many “wise guys” want to steal the newbie’s money; 4. Moneymaking is easy IF you are doing it the right way.
- The main ideas should be more clearly and more concisely composed in a logical order. These ideas should get in the subconscious of the reader without becoming obvious, that I want to explain these things to him/her.
- This part should become more and more depressive, to drive the reader deeper into a hopeless mood. Although it must capture his interest to read further.
- There is no need for each and every idea developed, but this part must efficiently prepare the reader for better understanding the next part.
I’m open for any suggestion.
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In the last part (in RED) some parts should be rewritten to become MORE EFFECTIVE IN ENTICING THE READER TO BUY.
Guidelines:
- Main Ideas: : 1. I’ve strumbled upon my lost opportunity; 2. I discovered the best marketing platform in this re-found company (tools, services, support); 3. Market comparison, - Contrast between the market services and prices versus this company’s services and prices. For this contrast to become evident, I need to present the market first, to drive the reader’s state of mind down again, then driving him up again by showing the solution in my company’s offer; 4. First “Call-To-Action”; 5. There is no effective marketing without quality marketing tools; 6. This company is one of the very few legitimate and genuine companies on the Internet, it’s a REAL support for his members; 7. Second “Call-To-Action”; 8. Special Offer; 9. Third “Call-To-Action”.
- This part should be more and more enticing, the reader’s optimism and enticement should grow as he/she gets closer and closer to the “Call-To-Action”. The last “Call-To-Action” should be the more enticing.
I’m open for any suggestion.
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The second document (Proofreading3.docx) contains 2 texts for proofreading (480 words). It’s a very easy tiny job.
Thank you,
Best regards,
Laszlo Kolumban
Topic: Internet Marketing
Tone: Enthusiastic
Extensive research needed: no
Extra notes:
Hi there,
There are two documents in this project.
The first one (SalesPage.docx) is the text of a sales page. I need it rewritten, to make it more effective. Please DON’T bid for this job if you don’t feel prepared for efficiently rewriting the text in this first document.
As “Tone” I selected “Enthusiastic” from the drop-down menu, but it can be witty, friendly, humorous, but DON’T make it formal.
Different parts in the text are written in different colours. There are different instructions for each part (colour):
-------------------------
The first part (in BLACK) can be ignored, I’m somewhat satisfied with it, but I’m open for your suggestions if you feel necessary.
----------------------------
The second part (in GREEN) is just one sentence. I need the message of that sentence, but I don’t like as it sounds. This sentence can be rewritten IF it gets better, but the meaning should remain the same.
--------------------------------
The next part (in BLUE) must be rewritten to become MORE READABLE and LESS BORING:
Guidelines:
- Main Ideas: 1. Affected by the ”Shiny Object Syndrome I’ve left stupidly an excellent opportunity; - 2. Moneymaking requires: know-how, work, TOOLS –> EXPENSES; - 3. Many “wise guys” want to steal the newbie’s money; 4. Moneymaking is easy IF you are doing it the right way.
- The main ideas should be more clearly and more concisely composed in a logical order. These ideas should get in the subconscious of the reader without becoming obvious, that I want to explain these things to him/her.
- This part should become more and more depressive, to drive the reader deeper into a hopeless mood. Although it must capture his interest to read further.
- There is no need for each and every idea developed, but this part must efficiently prepare the reader for better understanding the next part.
I’m open for any suggestion.
--------------------------------
In the last part (in RED) some parts should be rewritten to become MORE EFFECTIVE IN ENTICING THE READER TO BUY.
Guidelines:
- Main Ideas: : 1. I’ve strumbled upon my lost opportunity; 2. I discovered the best marketing platform in this re-found company (tools, services, support); 3. Market comparison, - Contrast between the market services and prices versus this company’s services and prices. For this contrast to become evident, I need to present the market first, to drive the reader’s state of mind down again, then driving him up again by showing the solution in my company’s offer; 4. First “Call-To-Action”; 5. There is no effective marketing without quality marketing tools; 6. This company is one of the very few legitimate and genuine companies on the Internet, it’s a REAL support for his members; 7. Second “Call-To-Action”; 8. Special Offer; 9. Third “Call-To-Action”.
- This part should be more and more enticing, the reader’s optimism and enticement should grow as he/she gets closer and closer to the “Call-To-Action”. The last “Call-To-Action” should be the more enticing.
I’m open for any suggestion.
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The second document (Proofreading3.docx) contains 2 texts for proofreading (480 words). It’s a very easy tiny job.
Thank you,
Best regards,
Laszlo Kolumban
Laszlo K.
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