Proofreading and Critique of MA Education 12,000 word Dissertation

Num. of words: 12000
Industry: Education
Topic: Disaffection
Tone: Formal/Professional
Extra notes: My dissertation is 12,000 words for an MA in Education. I'm fairly comfortable with spelling, punctuation, grammar etc as my personal tutor has proofread and offered changes for each individual section. However, nobody has (or will, until it is marked) read the whole thing from beginning to end, and I am trying to find someone who will do so to check for coherence, repetition, irrelevant information,subjects that I brought up at the beginning and then forgot about at the end etc. Basically I am just looking for someone who would be able to critique my dissertation as a whole piece. I am currently working on the results/conclusions section, which needs to be with my tutor by March 13th, after which I would receive her feedback, make the changes and then send the completed dissertation to you. Deadline- April 5th.