Editing immigration statement/testimonial

I've written a 30 page statement for my immigration application and I need someone with a legal background to edit my statement. The final product needs to be factual and explain my matter clearly and strongly. I need the final product in 7 days. Pls email me with your experience and request for the statement for your review to supply me with a quote.

I received the following feedback from my solicitor and I've hit a wall in editing it. I believe the document contains all the facts.

As discussed, your testimonial will need to be amended to include facts which can substantiated and not refer to guidance. It is unnecessarily lengthy. I would advise you to amend it and send it back to me with a clear set of concise points and issues that you wish to rely on for your case.