I need help to write some creative text

Kind of writing: Story
Num. of words: 259
Topic: Short story
Tone: Witty/Sharp
Extensive research needed: no
Extra notes: I have to pitch a short story that will be made into a 3min video.

I have come up with a basic idea and description but i feel that my text could use some more description so I would like some help from someone to make this idea sound really appealing .... I need to do this ASAP my deadline is tonight.


Below I have attached my text idea, and some pictures as a reference to the style i am looking to execute. Would be great to collaborate with someone who is passionate about writing , my budget isn't a lot at all I understand that so please get in touch if you are interested in the idea.

Thank You!