I need someone to improve my website copy, include my keywords & craft call to action

Num. of words: 500-600
Industry: Art and Design
Information for the business: Wedding photographer
Topic: PRESERVING YOUR LEGACY FOREVER
Tone: Sincere
Outline & Structure: I would like some to visit my website at http://darlingtonjonesimagery.com first to get a feel for my current tone before applying.

1. Get better headers for the sections on my homepage
2. Get me better copy for the about section on homepage
3. Write a call to action for homepage
4. Include copy in each section on homepage which speaks to my ideal client
5. Write the pop-up email grab
6. Improve the copy on my about me page
7. Call to action about me page
8. Improve copy on packages page
9. Call to action packages
10. Improve contact me page copy
11. Call to action for footer
Extensive research needed: no
Extra notes: A website that is EXCELLENT at copy in my opinion is HTTP://MARIEFORLEO.COM

This website is a great reference because on the homepage doesn't have lots of words.
Her About me pages is really well done (BUT WAY TOO LONG)
Her "THIS IS HOW WE ROLL" page is great and I think my packages page needs to be better