Need someone (preferably a woman) to proofread/edit final manuscript

Looking for a seasoned, highly experienced proofreader and editor to examine my current draft of manuscript, and provide notes and/or suggested edits and improvements in two areas:

1) Grammar / Overall "readability"

2) Appeal to female readers

The book is about verbal seduction & phone sex techniques for men, so my primary audience is the male reader ... BUT ... many women have expressed an interest in reading this book as well. I want to make sure that I am providing content that would make many women want to buy this book as well as a high number of men

Will send you a .pdf file of manuscript if I accept your bid