Job Description
I am starting my own usability business and am going to take the approach of sending a 'Written pitch' to my contacts. I would like to be able to provide a freelancer with my current version and ask them to turn it into a promoting and encouraging 'pitch' for business because it is currently reading a bit too much like a CV. The document will be no longer than 2 pages and is 'almost' there as my writing isn't too bad when I put my mind to it, but it does need some work. Please send quotes.
Clarification Board
S. D. on 03/09/2008 16:00Hi Julie
Thank you for inviting me to bid on your project. Ordinarily I would be delighted to bid as this is right up my street. Unfortunately I am just about to the leave for the USA and will be gone for pretty much the whole of September. I notice that your project expires in 6 days so I guess you are looking at getting the work completed before October.
I am sorry that I am unable to help on this occasion.
Kind regards and best of luck
Sue Dunn
J. W. on 04/09/2008 09:24Hi Sue - It was hoping to get my pitch done before I go away in the beginning of October for 3 weeks. I don't think there is too much work involved to be honest as I have all my thoughts, achievements, goals, business objectives, differentiators, etc on paper and the doc just needs some fresh eyes and a bit of spin so that it 'sizzles'. Would you have time to do it before you go? If not, when do you think you could do it? Regards, Julie
I. J. on 08/09/2008 18:05Hi Julie,
This sounds like an interesting project and I'd really like to do it. I have quite a bit of sales experience - including pitch writing - and my most recent PPH writing project was also a sales pitch which got great feedback from the Buyer.
Before bidding however, I want to be clear about the scope of the project: Are you looking for someone to simply "polish" what you have already done or will there be some rewriting involved?
Iris
J. W. on 09/09/2008 16:02Hi Iris -
Thank you for your interest. I basically have a document that you would need to read and digest and then transform into a sizzling sales pitch for my new business. The first part of the doc is about usability and what my business can offer and it then describes all my business USPs to show how I differentiate myself from other usability consultants. I would need you to come up with the actual structure of the document (what the headings should be for a pitch...eg. My business, what you would get, etc.) and I need to know things like should I mention cost...etc. The document is about four pages right now but it needs to be reduced to no more than one page really. If this sounds interesting to you please do bid.
Thanks and kind regards,
Julie
S. D. on 03/10/2008 16:25Hi Julie
I am sorry that I was away when you replied to my email. I am now back in the UK and would be delighted to make a bid to work with you on this project. The only problem is I am only registered to bid for work in two categories: Writing and Translation and Marketing/Sales/PR. As you have entered your project under Web/IT I can't access it in order to enter a bid. Any chance you can re-enter the proposal under Writing and Translation?
I am free to work to on your pitch from 6th October and my bid is £90 + VAT.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kind regards
Sue Dunn
F. L. on 07/10/2008 12:47I would like to bid for this opportunity, but unfortunately I think I may have the same problem as someone else in that I am unable to bid. I would be delighted to work on your pitch and am free immediately. My fee would be £100 no VAT
Kind Regards
Frances
B. V. on 08/10/2008 10:48
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Thanks & Regards
S. K. on 13/10/2008 19:56I KNOW I CAN DO THIS,CAN YOU PROVIDE ME THE DETAILS
MANY THANKS
J. W. on 20/10/2008 17:41Hi Sue Dunn,
I have now posted my project under Writing and Translation and have sent you a request for a bid on it - although I have seen the bid you have offered (oh they do make this a bit tricky for us don\'t they! I guess they have to...) Anyway, I would like to know what I would get for the price you quoted me please? Would we be able to talk on the phone once you have read my document? Would I get the chance to feedback and get one or two revisions...not that I am expecting to have to do any - your writing looks excellent... but in case there are any misunderstandings etc. Please bid once my project goes live in the Writing section and let me know your thoughts. Thanks and kind regards, Julie